Mosaic of life.

Mosaic of life gave me an impression that it will be a great poem.

The content itself is like a mosaic. It was so nice that you will say that life is a mosaic. Its very simple yet I can feel something when reading it especially the title. Another special and effective part was the first line "Surreal, strange, sudden". I liked it.

But, the poem did not satisfy what I wanted to read because of the title. But manisha you did say you just jotted it down, so I think you can improve it more.

This is incredibly beautiful; it's very simplistic, and that's what I love.

Describing life in the form of a "mosaic" is very intriguing. I love the use of sibilant sounds on the first line, "Surreal, strange, sudden" - it's very snappy and emphasizes both the literal and metaphorical rapidity being described. Again, the use of repeated sounds in "Making meaningless mishmashes" and "fairy-lands fantastical fiction" is really strong and adds a lot of fluidity to the overall poem.
This is really something.

I really like this poem. It's simple, but has alot of meaning behind it.

Encased by extraordinary episodes

like fairy-land’s fantastical fiction

< I like the fairy-land's part in the sentence. also, the encased part. It's bringing out alot of detail and nice descriptive words. Like, instead of just trapped, you used encased. brilliant!

Iv'e read alot of your stuff, and it's really good!


Like the Poem, or not, The Magic Alive, and A Rememberance.
My favorite has to be, As a Cloud.



Keep it up though! Great work, like I said up top.