Charles Dickens

by manisha

Published February 8, 2012

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this poem is for a contest. its supposed to be about Charles Dickens. i wanted to post it here before i submitted it anywhere. please do leave a review as i am in big need of it!
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You became my eternal guide
When I first learnt to word my thoughts.
Under your grace I learnt,
How and how not to write.
          Oh, my invisible teacher,
          You became my master
         Telling me always to
          Write and write.
I gained more and more
As I read your words
Through ages- upheld
Celebrated and stored
         You, my sir,
         Fought through your books,
         Against evil and society;
         Teaching me all the way to voice my hurt and anger too...
Oh dear maestro,
You taught me everything,
From the essence of Christmas to
Having great expectations.
          You continue to be there
         to rectify me, to refine what I do.
        I thank you sir,
        For being my greatest teacher.
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Pilot wrote a review Review · Feb 8, 2012

Wow! That was great! I recently had a quick class in Language Arts on Charles Dickens, so I understand where you come from. I can bet he's not just an inspiration for you, but for many others. I really enjoyed your word choices. At some parts things rhymed, but in others the words just went well together. There was a constant theme to the poem, so the message was clear: Charles Dickens inspires you and helped improve your writing.

I wouldn't be surprised if turns out to be a top entry in the contest! Good luck!

thank you! i was really worried about the poem...i wanted it to be good enough for any contest.



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