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Love the originality! I've never written poetry but I could easily relate to that line; 'A kind which gushes, not from a well wielded pen. but from a crazy heart just wanting to write'. This was a fun piece to read
I really love this! It's honest, simple, cute, i could easily relate to it, and it's just all around happy! I loved it, great job(:
This is good its makes me wonder about what your asking. I have no objections about your peom.
Keep writing from soul heart and mind
I like this poem. I like it because it flows very nicely
I like this poem. I like it because it flows very nicely from line to line, and I also like it because it asks what a poem is. To me, a poem is whatever I can put into a bunch of verses. I know it sounds crazy and stupid but for me, it works.
I can't really think of stuff that I would, personally, change, but I'm not the most experienced critic ever. Nice work.
I like this poem because it is honest and simple to how you were feeling at the time. Unfortunately, I think it is also the kind of poem all of us poets have written at one point when we couldn't think of anything else to write except for about the fact that we like writing.
My favorite part is the last part where you state that you will keep on writing forever. I very much hope you keep on writing because if you have so much passion for it, you obviously were meant to share your writing with everyone else!