Hiya! Space here for a short lil review.
Holy crap. I couldn't NOT review this. Once again, you've created a truly beautiful piece of literature.
Flash fiction can sometimes be hard to create, because of how short and quick it is, but you successfully made this short story captivating and interesting to read.
The mysterious topic mixed with the colorful, elaborate grammar and description really pulls in the reader.
and rather then making me beg for more, im more satisfied with the short story by itself, and it leaves me daydreaming about the backstory, what's happening, the characters, etc.
all in all, it's a really quick, satisfying read. good job!
~Space
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