Good afternoon friend!
Apologies for happy biases in the following review. To begin with, I'm in love with your writing style. It reminds me of many drafts i have saved in dark folders away from judgmental eyes. Reading your verses is like body surfing in the ocean on a windy day, Your first line is calm and sober but as your poem progresses the power of your words surges like the waves, growing ever more intense until the end. At the end it crashes to a calm by repeating the first verse. I love your word usage, the paired adjectives and actions and use of alliteration in parts really appeals to me.
When I first began reading, it momentarily bugged me that some of your verses are capitalized and some are not. But as i read i realized you used that to your advantage in terms of organization. Each capitalized line begins a section of your work, each capitalized line continues that. I rather like it.
Your spelling is impeccable, so good that!
Have a great day and may you never again know writers block
Points: 467
Reviews: 130
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