Young Writers Society

Dreams are one of the most fascinating topics and you've captured the essence of their mystery. The way you laid it all out, it gives a haunting sort of feel, yet the center of it all is dreams so it gives it a lulling sort of feel. Sorry, I'm rambling.
It was fabulous. The embodiment of the dream-maker is so perfect and I love the content of this.
However, earlier in the poem there were a few lines that could've used an extra word.
Loved it! Keep writing, it's obvious you have a gift for poetry!

Hey there, ElvenJedi! Welcome to the Young Writers Society. I think you'll be at home here, because you obviously have a real passion for poetry. I really liked this piece; it's short but detailed, and you have such beautiful imagery. I thought this might have been a sort of fairytale, told in rhyme. It lacks a plot though, so it's not that. It's more of a recount, an informative piece about the creator of dreams, and it works well. One thing you could possibly talk about more (in a couple extra lines, maybe?) is why the dream-maker is a young girl. Is it because kids have greater imaginations than adults? Some extra metaphors and imagery could explain that, and add to the poem. But I love it how it is, anyway. Thanks for sharing!

Damn. All I can say really. I like it.

I relish the vivid words! I really did enjoy this poem, despite it lacking a very original rhyme scheme. But besides being a very adventurous and inspiring piece of literature, there's not much to say about this! I really liked how you added the slight detail of it being a moonless night! It really set the feel for the rest of the poem for me. Thank you for your marvelous work of poetry! IT will make a fine addition to the Green Room.