they told me (they never told me)

Hello Blue!!

Can I call you that??

Anyway......

This is really interesting.

I love the structure of the poem its really creative.
I love the similes you put in about the leaves, and revving engine.
That's fairly nice.

I feel that the font doesn't really go though.
Maybe try to change it into a creative one so it matches up more with the structure.

Also I would suggest putting punctuation in as well, but that is your choice.

Either than that its really good.

Keep up the good work!

Happy review day!

Sincerely
Anma

Hey girl, just one nit:

they told me (to) be myself

otherwise I love the structure and emotion of this poem

Thank you for sharing!

Hi @BlueAfrica I am here to do a quick review on your poem. first things first.
all in all I think this is very relistac and General, so I find that is the one thing that I did not really think was right but anyways that's really not a big thing to worry about,

:Now lets stop talking about that and lets go to the good things about this poem:

I really liked how this started, I feel like the name to this poem goes so well with the hole thing, I really feel like the lines are just really flowing, its like its moving to some sort of music, I also feel like you ended the poem really nicely, and that can be a big thing with me, in some other poems I just feel some times like these lines missing. but this was just so nice every line was were it should be, another big thing that you got right was that, this poem was so easy to understand, these also this image developing in my mind. I don't think that this poem could have been done any better. then you did it.

So that was all I could say about this poem, so keep up the grate poem righting, I look forward to reading more of them, you are a grate poet, I do hop you find this review nice, and carming.

*Just keep cool *

@EagleFly out to seek and kill

Hey Blueafrica , it is Theia here for a review.

"They told me "they never told me ,the name struck me pretty hard.The poem is AWESOME,you have done an amazing job.The structure of the poem is so unusual perfect for this.I loved the way you put forth your idea that people say something and mean another(correct me if I am wrong).

I think you could work a little on the punctuation .The rhyming is also not regular.It is okay if you want to keep it the way it is ,it is your poem after all.I loved the way you laid out this poem they told me first and then they never told me,precisely what really happens first the lies come then the truth.

I loved your poem because I felt it every word of it and I hope you keep posting such good works