Young Writers Society

Bottom Cracker (Foundation): The poem's foundation is a humorous and relatable observation about the common failure of New Year's resolutions. The central theme is the cyclical nature of ambitious goals and the eventual return to old habits. The foundation is clearly established and sets the stage for the poem's lighthearted tone.

Filling (Body): The poem's filling consists of witty and specific examples of typical resolutions, such as fitness goals, financial savings, and dietary changes. Each example is briefly described and then contrasted with the reality of backsliding, illustrating the poem's central theme through a series of relatable scenarios. The use of vivid imagery ("Amazon boxes pile sky-high," "pizza's here") enhances the humor and reinforces the poem's message. The structure, using rhyming couplets, keeps the pace light and engaging.

Top Cracker (Conclusion): The poem concludes with a message of self-acceptance and a shift in perspective. Instead of focusing on the failure to achieve grand resolutions, the poem suggests that finding joy and laughter in the process is a more valuable outcome. This message subverts the typical narrative of New Year's resolutions, offering a more optimistic and realistic alternative. The final couplet provides a satisfying and encouraging resolution to the poem's playful observation.

Frosting (Style): The poem employs a conversational and informal tone, making it easily accessible and engaging for the reader. The use of humor and irony creates a lighthearted and relatable atmosphere. The consistent rhyme scheme and meter contribute to the poem's playful rhythm and maintain a consistent flow throughout. The simple, direct language complements the poem's accessible and humorous nature.

Ha! This was a jaunty, cheerful and slyly satiric poem, and twas fun to read! Using a an aabb rhyme scheme served the tone well, and kept the pacing speedy.

The new me's gone--hello, old guy!

Back to the couch, where they truly belong.

Ooooooooooooooooohhh this is so good!! Let me dive right on in to this poem!

First off, I love the rhyme! Having every line rhyme adds a lightheart, fun pace that's easy to read and makes the reader anticipate the word that the line will end with. I think that's the real thing that got me reading the whole thing.

I love how you discuss this point that everyone makes these new years resolutions and then mess up. It's a pattern that everyone follows.

Treadmills hum, yoga mats are new.

Back to the couch where they belong

The new me’s gone—hello, old guy!