Young Writers Society

Hi fortis! Just going to review this haiku of yours!

It'll be quick XD. Of course it will!

are scarred from running through thorns

in another time.

This is a very nice set up for perhaps a novel and I felt that the potential reached far beyond a haiku. Having said that I did enjoy this poem

The princess's feet
are scarred from running through thorns
in another time.

Review time from Pokemon! I didn't expect THAT. I completely forgot what a haiku was until you made this. I can picture a princess with blonde hair, white/pink dress, and a flower on her head. What do you want her to look iike. You also made it sound like this takes place in a forest/jungle. Well, since this is so short, it has a short reveiew form me. Good Night! Or whatever time you are reading thi-........WHAIT A MINUTE. ARE YOU? THAT PERSON!?

Hi, I am a newbie, the name is asianqueen17. This will be my first time reviewing so, sorry if I sound dumb. Wow this is the shortest thing I have ever read, but yet you say so much in just techniquely one sentence since you don't have a period anywhere but at the very end. Wow, I just sound retarded up in that sentence. X.X Anywho, I love the imagery you have put in it, like everyone else said, it would be a great beginning for a long poem. I hope you keep up on your writings!

God Bless!

This is very compelling it makes me want to read more about this scarred footed princess! And with its short length it still tells a story where you can use your imagination to continue the princesses story. I think this is a good starter to a much longer poem, I think it would be great if you extended on this give us a better feel of the princess.

I am very intrigued.
This was done very well. I liked this a lot.
I love the way you put it together, and it made sense.
It all flowed together, and it will interest a reader!
I am very pleased with this.
I have read at least 5 haiku's on here, and in all honesty, this is my favorite. In three lines, you created some of the best imagery I've seen in a while!
Keep it up!
I can't wait to see more!

Here to review is none other then the one and only Knight Malachi.
So this is one of the 2 haiku's I'v read on here. The other one was very good, and not to disappoint, so was this. I have to say it could hold so much mystery and intrigue, plus what sounds like a lot of adventure.Actually this could be a poem for a novel. It could be at the beginning, and then you could tell the story of the princess. Just a though I had when I read it, but it looks like you just write poetry. anyway, good job.
Keep it up!