true friend

Cute poem, Smile.

This seems like a personal poem, so I won't go into hardcore reviewing mode.

Other than a few grammar/spelling errors, the only little thing that's a bit odd about this is:

And about how you went in the deep

Of my heart....

Timmyjake here to give you a short review!

Ok, I just wanted to say that this poem was very touching. It says how deep your friendship with another can be. I'll just nitpick the few things I saw wrong with this piece. Here we go!

As we’re seating side by side.

Just a spelling issue, but I think you meant "sitting"

And about how you went in the deep

I think that "deep" should be changed to "depths" instead. I think it would flow better.

I have opinions , but never tell lies.

This line doesn't make sense to me, really. What does an opinion have to do with a lie? Perhaps you could say instead that you don't ever try to hurt your friend with your opinion, but you have to say your mind.

I’m sure you’ll do the same for me , cause

You’re a true friend

I think that the "cause" could be switched to the line below it. It might flow better that way.

Separating !!…….never

That is the final line that I think doesn't flow well.

Now that I have pointed out my little nitpicks, let me just tell you that I loved this song!! I have had friends move away, sometime separating themselves from me with just a mental wall, and this song really says what a best friend is.
Keep writing!
~Timmyjake

This is beautiful If you made a CD I would buy it. What tempo is this? Is it a slow song or a fast rocking fun song like Avril Lavigne Girlfriend

I liked every line of it. This song reminds me of myself and my bff. Lovely!

Lovely!
Although instead of seating it should be sitting. And other then that it should be no ones gonna change my mind. They were the basic errors could be typos too. Anyways, I really love the sound of this. Its a song right? So when you compose it I bet it will turn out to be an awesome song Songwise this does not have any flaw overall and I think we can overlook those if its a good song with equally good music. Could be improved though.