Note: This is based off of Miley Cyrus's "We Can't Stop", in case it wasn't obvious. I re-did it as a Review Day spirit song for the Blue Team, but team colors/names can fit in. Apologies for the formatting. Enjoy! :)
This Review Day we'll review what we want
This Review Day we'll max points all we want
This Review Day we'll sandwich all we want
We can "like" all we want
Get the stars that we want
Black Knights climbing up stats everywhere
Giving great feedback 'cause we do care
Today let's give lots of reviews out
If you're lucky you might even get some now
Last Sunday, you know it's time to go
Can't let a work sit alone
If it's got 0 or 1 reviews
You'll get more points for your team too
La la dee da dee
We like to critique
Nitpick everything
Typing as much as we want
This is our team
This is our site
And we can't stop,
No we won't stop,
Can't you see we'll review like Black Knights?
Can't you see that our team's got this fight?
And we can't stop
No we won't stop
Soon enough we'll hit 750
On our epic reviewing spree
'Cause we can't stop
Let's get out of review ruts
Getting pumped up in our team clubs
Only the points will judge us
Forget the Earthbenders
'Cause the Knights need you
If you can do just one review
Try to max it out in the Green Room
We're gonna get it down yeah
Get our points up yeah, yeah
La la dee da dee
We like to critique
Nitpick everything
Typing as much as we want
This is our team
This is our site
And we can't stop,
No we won't stop,
Can't you see we'll review like Black Knights?
Can't you see that our team's got this fight?
And we can't stop
No we won't stop
Soon enough we'll hit 750
On our epic reviewing spree
'Cause we can't stop
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I like this!
Yea!
I should edit this for the Black Knights...
Love this!!! I even despise Miley Cyrus less because she inspired you to do this
lol
Haha thanks!
You took a horrible song and made it good!
Haha thanks!
You took a great song and turned it into a great review theme for YWS.I bet ThereseCricket would love this.I love the flow of it.It has great humor.It was really funny.You should make more songs for YWS.It has great wording.You did a wonderful job.It was really enjoyable.I bet this will be Blue teams new theme song.Good luck!!!
Thanks!
Is it weird that I was listening to 'The Ants Go Marching on' as I read this? Because I thought it was! The beats go together perfectly for some really weird reason (though they're both SO different). (By the way, I'm gonna keep this review short -seeing as there really isn't all that much for me to say!).
One thing: I didn't really read this piece the way the song goes. It has a VERY different pattern, and the flow is really different. But that's okay, because I thought that that particular song really sucked. -_-
*doesn't like the formatting either.
Comparing this piece to the song though, you do have a lot of similarities. Nice job. Wasn't it team Black and team Green this time around too? I really thought it was! . . . So why say otherwise.
Just a few small things. Nice work -KEEP WRITING!
~Black~
Hm...I thought the pattern fit pretty well. But I think I lost it a bit in the second verse. As for the team names, the song mentions red and I wanted to keep it generic (of course, it could be modified to fit team colors/themes). Thanks for the comment!
^^
Hi Niteowl!What a great job here.I really enjoy reading and at the same time try to follow the song!I totally like this.My favourate part here is maybe the chorus Lol;
"La la dee da dee
We like to critique
Nitpick everything
Typing as much as we want
This is our team
This is our site
And we can't stop,
No we won't stop,"*Really awesome!well done and keep writing here in YWS,cheer!