I love this song especially the metaphorical content. I love the line "We would dance like rain on soil" It gives off kind of a soft vibe into the past. Plus people will be able to relate to this considering a lot of people are going through relationship problems. I also love the ending where you tell how you still feel. I'm an artist also so I relate to true lyrics. There are a couple of spelling errors but they're lyrics so it doesn't matter, but I mean you can tell they were just a slip of the finger so I'll let you look over it. Other than that I like it and keep it up. This is nice work.
Points: 438
Reviews: 3
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