Oh my gosh! XDDDD
Hey, Momo, it is Vilnius here to review your poem! When I saw the word ''ode'' in the title, I was expecting a longer poem. Typically, odes are written with stanzas that have at least ten lines, and normally an ode has at least three to five stanzas (which sounds like a lot, but once you get going, it usually is not ;-;). Just mental note of that for personal reference XD
oh, bagel crumb, my dearest friend,
awww, you have made a new friend! You will have to introduce me at some point, you know XD
you know i love your company!
Maybe I will, too, at some point <.< XDDDDD
but i think you've gotten too comfortable,
because i can't get you to leave.
Nuuuuu, let it stay! >:( Don't make your new friend leave, especially before I have a chance to meet them! :(
Really, though, I must admit that this was cute and hilarious to read this afternoon XDD Maybe now I will have to write one about pollen in the south <.<
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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