Hey there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am back here to make a review or comment about your poem with *some really poetic title*. It's been awhile because I've been busy with school. Anyways, let's go!
First impressions. I wanted to read something nice and short, was excepting to read a romance poem but I ended up with this one. Not complaining though because it was a good one. The message of this is good too.
"what we wear on our wrists says much about us
some wear bracelets, bearing the names
of those who have passed, the names
of those who mean much to us
patterns and designs that hold memories
of a trip taken long ago
of a gift given by a friend"
I rarely wear something on my wrist but this is a nice one. It also tells us how other people differ because some wear bracelets, with their names on it, the names of loved one too, a pattern that holds memories or it was just given by someone important to that person. I see a lot of children outside wearing bracelets for all the reasons given in this stanza so I found it nice.
"some have tattoos
symbols that remind us of what we stand for
an impulsive decision made at a young age"
Yeah, I see people get tattoos because of their culture, someone or something they really love, memories, or any symbol that means a lot to anyone. I see a lot of people have tattoos with someone's face, a memory or a thing that they love so much on their skin. Usually I see people with tattoos on their arms, hands or backs.
"some bear scars
a tale of their life told in tiny markings
a representation of a time of hardship
that one has overcome"
This is my favorite stanza. Because I do have scars that remind me of the hardships I have overcame. Some people show me markings on their body saying they love having it because it reminds them of a favorite thing that happened to them or a big hardship they faced before.
There are just some things that we have on your bodies or even symbols that remind us about bad/good things. I am happy I got to remember that mark and the memory of that with this poem. Overall, it is good. Keep it up! Have a good day/night too. I just saw on your related items, you are a marvel, star wars and the avatar tv show because of your avatar hihi. Anyways, see you around c: