Young Writers Society

The fact that you can take some simple keyboard gibberish and put it into some kind of context, and make it actually have emotion, is really impressive to me. This poem is astronomically relatable since really emotions are never really "I feel happy" or "I feel sad" they are far more confusing and complex, as you described them. I like this and it makes me feel utylvjycnomx.

The keyboard smashes are a great way of explaining emotions and how people feel on a daily basis. I also get so many of the words

" i don't know what

asdkhkfhgaskdjh

this is

why am me?

who are I??

I 100% understand! and I would like to say the grammar errors added to the true feeling and emotion of this poem. I would like to congratulate you on a good job!

This poem is fantastic and far too relatable to the Internet Folk. I only have one word for this poem: gdshyfhkjhgdsf.

You actually did do very well with this poem!! It's enjoyable to read and has very good pacing, and of course your lovely choice in words.

Overall, it was hgfkjsdgfd!! very good

Hiya Ashlyn here for a review ramp in randomness!! Before I dive into it though please know that this review randomness is not intended to offend you or make your writing look bad.

ajshdgfj

gaduhrulf

i don't know what

asdkhkfhgaskdjh

this is

why am me?

who are i?

ahsdkjufh?

i have no words

only

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