my feelings are
ajshdgfj
my brain is
gaduhrulf
i don't know what
asdkhkfhgaskdjh
this is
why am me?
who are i?
ahsdkjufh?
i have no words
only
sdkfhasdkhfiausdhofiuhs
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The fact that you can take some simple keyboard gibberish and put it into some kind of context, and make it actually have emotion, is really impressive to me. This poem is astronomically relatable since really emotions are never really "I feel happy" or "I feel sad" they are far more confusing and complex, as you described them. I like this and it makes me feel utylvjycnomx.
Thanks for the review!!
The keyboard smashes are a great way of explaining emotions and how people feel on a daily basis. I also get so many of the words
" i don't know what
asdkhkfhgaskdjh
this is
why am me?
who are I??
I 100% understand! and I would like to say the grammar errors added to the true feeling and emotion of this poem. I would like to congratulate you on a good job!
Thanks!
This poem is fantastic and far too relatable to the Internet Folk. I only have one word for this poem: gdshyfhkjhgdsf.
You actually did do very well with this poem!! It's enjoyable to read and has very good pacing, and of course your lovely choice in words.
Overall, it was hgfkjsdgfd!! very good
Thank you!! <3
Hiya Ashlyn here for a
reviewramp in randomness!! Before I dive into it though please know that thisreviewrandomness is not intended to offend you or make your writing look bad.Ahhh beautifully, superbly put.
Music to my poet heart. It's just so artistic, so...gorgeous. And perfectly compliments the previously put ajshdgfj
from the asfhasdfljhsadfjkh to the avnaiegfiaevdnaf you really know how to speak my language :0
Anyway, jokes aside, this is actually relatable, and so true. Sometimes random letters strung together are the only way I can express myself and seriously-you really did speak my language. Aadjhfaskfhasdfkjh is like my mainstream way of expressing myself uwfraergu. You know what else? You made me smile so thanks for writing this <333
Keep chaosing
-Ashlyn
Thank you! <3
The review was probably 100% not helpful imao, but your welcome of course <333