Hi Momo,
First off Momo my suggestion is that Momo your poem was alright but really is in your feelings through Momo let me tell you why in the poem Momo a plane filled with people.
though it has a pilot,
it seems to have a personality of its own.
i whisper, take me with you.
a butterfly on the flowers,
flitting from petal to petal.
carefree with no destination.
i whisper, take me with you kinda in my suggestion is that it was made of feelings about you imagine stuff that's fine cause i does that to imagine things Momo.
My Compliment Momo is that reading your poem made me learning more experiments from you when i make a poem is write what imagine Momo but till then what i ever imagine i writes it down Momo.
Good luck writing Momo have a nice day/or night
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