Young Writers Society

Hello! Wallflower here with a quick review

I absolutely loved this poem!! This poem was so lovely and simple and comforting, and the personification of the boat, the imagery of just you and the boat alone on a vast sea - it's absolutely lovely. I especially loved the second stanza - it really just Made the poem for me, especially this line:

Maybe the boat was singing

its salty rickety song

Hi Lim,

First off Lim my impressions are I really love pieces of your work that you putted out Lim and i also have a fav line that i enjoy of reading Lim is There on the hard blue sea

the little brown boat was carrying me

and I was bringing the little brown boat

across the hard path of the sea.
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Maybe the boat was singing

its salty rickety song,

and maybe my ears were ringing

but I tried to sing along. Lim this part of the poem was just incredible.

My Compliment Lim is that I really had enjoyed your poems that you were putting out and I hope i see more work put out cause me i really enjoy some people poetry.

Good Wishes Writing Lim

Hey there! Lost here with a review!
First of all, that's a good poem, I liked it!
Very simple yet fun, good rhyming along with good poetry sense. I really liked the rhyming scheme and the poetry format you used here. The first and last stanza matches really well

"Maybe the boat was singing
its salty rickety song,
and maybe my ears were ringing
but I tried to sing along."

I really liked these lines specifically. Your way of describing the "song of the boat" was really amusing and fun!

And lastly, let me answer your questions XD
1) I would read this to a small child. Uh, maybe my 6 year old cousin?
2) This poem puts me in kind of a playful, childish mood.
3)It's a normal small brown boat. Like the wooden ones you see in cartoons and stuff XD

Anyways, really good work and neatly done! A solid 8/10
Keep up with your writing!
Good wishes! <3 ^_^

If I had to read this to someone,I would read it to my younger cousins,so that they can say they had an interesting poem read to them when they were younger.This poem makes me feel nostalgic for nursery rhymes.The boat I’m imagining looks like a little brown and wooden sailboat.I hope that you have a fantastic and cool day and night.