Hi, my name is Kz, I also write poetry. So, to dive in.
Author's questions:
1. How do you think the title relates to the poem?
So, the title of a poem, is a very important part of the poem. And I think that you shows very well. And the reason that I think this, is because I think that the title was probably based on the choice that the dog has to make. This seems obvious, which is why I'm not sure if I'm correct. Let me know.
2. Any awkward lines or images?
Not that I can think of. However, I think that "the crickets cry, unable to sleep for the sound of paws padding restlessly" is a very interesting line.
And as always, my favorite part, telling you what part of the poem caught my eye. Which for this masterpiece, will have to be,
"nothing but dew evaporated
a long time ago, grass that is
fresh but utterly uninteresting."
Thanks for sharing your amazing poem! Have a great morning/mid-day/afternoon/ or night!
-Kz.
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