This is a song I wrote after getting through a really hard time in my life. I finally felt like life had meaning and I had a purpose. I still have bad days, but now I know that the good days are worth powering through the bad. Here's the YouTube link if you want to hear how it sounds: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gFpKpJ47WUo
Woke up to a sun, sunny day.
Poured my coffee then it started to rain,
But that's okay 'cause I had nowhere to be.
Made some breakfast then I took a walk.
Of course, after the rain stopped.
Then I came home and cuddled with my cat.
I guess what I'm trying to say
Is that I'm having a good day.
I could use it after all of the bad times.
Life has been one big rain cloud after another,
But the sun is finally coming out.
There's a rainbow right above me and I can finally see
I'm where I'm supposed to be.
Now, don't get me wrong.
I still have days that are long,
And I just want them to be over.
So I can go to bed
And forget the demons in my head,
But I know that I can defeat them.
Because I am stronger than
I was before and
I know that I can get through this.
Life has been one big rain cloud after another,
But the sun is finally coming out.
There's a rainbow right above me and I can finally see
I'm where I'm supposed to be.
I know that I'll survive because
I've been through worse
And I still made it out alive.
Though I may be bruised and scarred,
I'll be strong.
I'll move on.
Life has been one big rain cloud after another,
But the sun is finally coming out.
There's a rainbow right above me and I can finally see
I'm where I'm supposed to be.
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This is a delightful song, it's straight to the point, and immediatly relatable. I adore this sort of songwriting, it's real emotions the writer had, and their getting it out in a positive way, artistically. I rate this, a 10/10. I love this song.
Hello! This is really cool! I watched the youtube video and it was AWESOME! The lyrics are amazing and your ukulele and singing were really good.
Maybe you could organize the lyrics into a verse/chorus/bridge setup? Or labeled... I don't know, just a way to have it be organized... It's fine how it is, though. Actually it might be better... Just a thought, though. You do what you like better.
The whole thing is really awesome!!!!!
Looking through there honestly isn't anything that I feel the need to fix- your word choice is spot on and it's all really beautiful.
~RowenaLynn
Beautiful! Love the song, lyrics are so well written, music is great. I have no edits for you. I love the way you used the sun coming out as a way to show that you were restoring your joy and love of life after having emotional days which you portray as rainy, stormy days. Beautiful work!
THIS IS SO GOOD
i play the ukulele and have tried to write some songs as well but they never seemed to come together. this on the other hand, is absolutely amazing.
hearing it and reading the words made my eyes water. i can relate so much and it really just makes me feel alive. okay so i'm starting to realize this isn't really a review but i honestly don't have one thing i would change! i can't wait to read and listen to more from you.
I just finished watching the video after reading the lyrics, and.. I'm so stunned. You're a multi talented person, not just a writer but a musician too!
I related to the lyrics, but hearing the song being sung made it so much more powerful, and your voice is just stunning<3
I have no critique for you, I just wanted to let you know you're a very talented person and I loved your song so much. I look forward to seeing and maybe hearing more of your work in the future!
Keep Writing,
-Katja
Thank you so much!