Hi, it's Wonderland Ashes.
I like your piece, it sort of reminds me of Demons by Imagine Dragons. I love that song, by the way, so that's a compliment from me. A really big one! Again, though, like other reviewers have stated, spelling and grammar are a problem in this one. But I understand- sometimes you just have to get your ideas out. Consider editing this piece. To disagree with ArticMonkey, though, I really like and understand the line where it says your tears turned to blood. Good work, but remember to work on it. Keep going, I know you have it!
-wonderlandashes
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