Random Poetry by me :)
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Drowning
This is the revised version... I might have made it worse though... not sure
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The Reason We Love
Edited version--dunno if I improved it or made it worse... feedback is awesome btw!
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The Dream-Maker
Wrote this late at night, looking out my window...
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Monster
It's not like what it sounds... this is not about a beast or dragon.
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Life Will Leave You Behind
I wrote this a while ago.... needs revision! feedback is awesome!
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Tie the Strings
Just wrote this :)
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Alone for Christmas
EDITED hope this is somewhat improved... feedback would be awesome!
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Hiding in a Corner
I wrote this awhile ago--plz review!
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He Won't Speak to Me Anymore
Reviews and feedback would be great!
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Another Year Passed
1) I'm not suicidal I was just in a weird mood when I wrote this 2) this is 12+ but theres nothing bad in it I just don't want lil kids reading it
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Dream Star
Reviews & feedback would be great!
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Two Rocks Fell Side by Side
Kinda free-verse, no specific rhyme scheme... Reviews would be appreciated!
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Breaking
That point before you're broken..
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Goodbye
This is just something I wrote to document the most recent chapter of my life, a poem about a friend moving far away.
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Boredom
Yep. You guessed it. I'm bored.
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I Lost My Shoe.
I lost my shoe, so I wrote a poem about it.
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Conditional Concern
Very dark themes regarding suicide & self harm, please don't read if you're easily triggered.
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you'd think.
kinda dark tbh -constructive criticism welcomed-
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Trapped
Critique is welcomed! Be warned, most of my writings are pretty dark,,,
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Me
a little different than what I usually do.. kinda melancholic as well I guess. constructive criticism always welcome!
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Safe Place
Constructive criticism would be fantastic, thanks!
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Heartstrings
I actually wrote this like a year ago, but I still like it, so yeah here it is. Constructive criticism always welcome!