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OK... so this is a simple one... I purposefully used "how" repeatedly, hoping I could transmit the despair. Anyway here it goes! Comments are welcome (even the harsh ones) to ...

Ok... I write a lot of poems. Mostly in Portuguese but I also write in English because I think it has words that I can put more feelings into that ...

Another one of my poems... Hope you like it! And comments are welcome to correct, give tips, say it stinks, anything that might help me! LOL _______________________________________ How come I ...

My soul has shred to pieces, my heart has burned to ashes, my tears are meaningless, as they run every single day; Full of sadness. My thoughts are only yours. ...

Hope you like it! If Galerius reviews on this one saying it's crap again I'll assume you have something agaisnt my poems! ____________________________________ Broken dreams Are my thoughts every momen

This could be good, this could be bad. i think a poet doesn't always have a great poem. He or she can have bad times too. So if this is ...

I didn't write this. The words just stumble out, so... I'm not responsible if this is really, but really bad! (getting excuses for being a lousy poet, but this girl ...

So because of reviews saying this suck, I decided to DELET it. Sorry for the inconvenient

Hey there! This one is about how I feel when I play the piano. I wrote this because I wanted to. Reviews are welcome, I don't mind if they are ...

To my best friend. This is for you. Judge it as you want. Be harsh, don't be. Hate it, love it. I'm here because of her. I only care for ...

This has no specific structure or rhyming structure. I just listened to a piano song that inspired me to this. Say it's sucks, say it's okay. Judge it as you ...

*reviews are welcome! * I do not want to linger anymore. My pain I can not ignore. And I'll stay on this dream Struggling for some air to scream Suppressed ...

*Hey there! It's me again. I haven't posted anything in a while, if about a week can be considered a while. Anyway, I'm sorry. At the end I changed structure. ...

*I know, not one of my bests, but I just thought of getting into the mood so i wrote this. Pleaseeeeee be nice. Say it sucks in a nice way ...

*Another miserable poem... *sigh* oh well, that's the way I am. Dark and depressing . Please review!* Drenched in my tears My heart drowned in pain. My thoughts are useless ...

*Another poem. Help will be much appreciated! Oh and in the last stanza the rhyme scheme changes. if you have an opinion of how I could make it stand for ...

This is short for me. Really short. So, enjoy... or don't. I don't know. Reviews are much appreciated! I laid down on the piano, my soul lingered on the keys; ...

So, this is for Rosey's Contest: topic42895.html I stared at the red flames dancing on a silent beautiful melody. It's warm battling the freezing night, It lives, it shines a ...

So, just another poem... Help is greatly appreciated! The flow is a bit messed up and the stanzas don't have a certain scheme She awaits by the window, her tears ...

I have wished, hoped, that this moment could be ours. Forever, with no pain, no scars. That time could stand still; That somehow this could be fate, and tomorrow could ...

*So I need a lot of help on this one. I'm not particularly comfortable with the ending. Open to suggestions! Oh and reviews will be much appreciated, no matter how ...

*Hey everyone! *talks as if anyone would listen* Anyway... here's another poem! I do not like it, thought. I think it could be much better and that it really did ...

*I'm leaving for a week, to a place where's no Internet, no YWS. This was something that came to my mind Reviews please!* Bye Bye YWS by Kat My dear ...

Can I brake? by Kat Something's just about to break. I can almost hear it crack, a sound of a dreadful mistake. Something's getting in the way. I can see ...

I haven't written poetry, that isn't for NaPo's, in so long, I'm not sure how to do it

*Hey, Greeters! See? A piece of work for you to review. Let's win the war! Reviews from everyone are welcomed ^_^* Lost memories by Kat When it smells just like ...

Do not write to me by Kat Words can mean too much; words can hurt too much. Like a song on a summer breeze, words can and will touch. Whatever ...

This is my first time trying to write a villanelle! Reviews will be appreciated, but see it from my newbie point And any advise on how to better execute a ...

For Shina's contest. I took as an inspiration this image . Burned out By Kat It burned silently; the flame, as if never to collapse, to die. It reminded me ...

Take a breath, the world is holding for your next step. Pull yourself together, don’t fall to death. I hear your voice, broken to whispers; If only I could just ...

A/N: I was eating gummy bears and listening to Michael Jackson's MTV tribute yesterday, so you can guess what you're up to read --' Between carmine roses and lullaby lilies ...

A/N: So, I based this on the Assassin's Tango by John Powell. This is the first poem I've written on this basics, like structure and so. Feedback is welcomed. Draw ...

A/N: For Pen (Explosive_Pen) because she rocks! And help will be much appreciated. Watch it pouring down -- hear it. Drops of cold, sweet water what some may call heaven’s ...

That I would be fineThere’s no need to apologize,I am not even desire is to have done more,made it bleed out, deeperhad it left scarlet paths; paths of sin andlonely, ...

A/N: Hello! I'm back with my awfully sketchy poetry. This is an improvement of theme for me, since my last poem posted here was all dark and stuff. I tried ...

Okay, so I knoooow this sucks. Seriously. That's why I'm posting it! For reviews and so not give something to my group to review and sabotage.xDghostly white roses,vainly tainted withcrimson ...

A/N: So, first poem in ages xD Reviews will be much appreciated ^.^ Withered by KatI don't mind the thorns,that clutch to my fleshlike piercing daggersFor the marks they'll leave,I ...

A/N: Okay, so first poem in months

A/N: So, it's been ages, I think, since I've last made an appearance in YWS xD I'm currently trying to figure out the new layout and see what I can ...