*I know, not one of my bests, but I just thought of getting into the mood so i wrote this. Pleaseeeeee be nice. Say it sucks in a nice way 
. So happy Valentine's to everyone!*
Should I write a love poem
Since it's Saint Valentine's day?
Should I propose to dance or to sing
Or can I do it in some other way?
Maybe try to send a letter
Or maybe plan a wonderful date?
but it's the big day already
Oh, I hope it's not too late!
Maybe I should call you
Or just text you
Isn't that a bit... heartless?
Oh gosh, what should I do?
Maybe just say it to your face
Yes, that's what I'll do.
I'll approach you and say:
"I love you"
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HI!!!!!! ok now for a wee bit of a review...
Too true!!!!!!!! I love this stanza!Love yous,
Lizzi
i really like your writing, it wonderful.
you really know how to write (:
i enjoyed reading this alott!
my favrite part was:
Maybe try to send a letter
Or maybe plan a wonderful date?
but it's the big day already
Oh, I hope it's not too late!
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I'll approach you and say:
"I love you"
WriteWatIWant! I haven't reviewed anything of yours yet. Well, here goes.
Do what?
Third line throws everything off beat. Try "But, alas, it's the big day already" or something along those lines. Just add a word or two to add more syllables.
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Otherwise, short and sweet with a good flow.
Just remember that flow and beat are always important in poetry.
Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
It's actually pretty good. These are actually some of the questions
that I think of when I like someone, but with more feeling. I
don't think that it really captures the confusion that we tend to
get when we really like someone. I still think its well written
though.
Hello, I've been searching for old poems and I found yours with just 1 review....I' ll give a shot:
I don't love all that effort for Valentine's day. Generally speaking, it's all capitalism. If you love someone, you can just say: "I love you" and that's enough. I liked your poem because it's simple. You displayed all those feelings that come around February, all that shimmering, all that strange feelings for someone...and that's important, really...
Apart from the few mistakes I think this poem is lovely, hope you had a great St. Valentines day.