Hi
I must say....great job done on keeping it short and effective.
The imagery was really alive and the power of fire was shown like never before.I liked the magnificence of fire you have shown in this poem and how it's sight can be so inspiring.
It's the flame, it's the spark,
It overpowers the Dark,
It is something to admire,
It is the Fire.
Great lines.
Good luck.
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