I like this poem and its quirkiness. It makes the laughing shadow look playful and mischievous rather than a malevolent thing. The poem, in terms of content, is kind of all over the place, but I feel this mimics the shadow. The shadow is something mischievous and hard to understand for the narrator. The only thing that bugs me with this poem is the lack of punctuation. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not.
Its getting darker to nowhere,
There are more, this is just the first example. Anyway, great poem!
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