This was very emotional and heart felt. I feel like this a lot (even when I'm on here sometimes). But enough about my depressed ass, let's get on to the review, shall we?
I already basically said that I love the content (if I wasn't clear enough, sorry. I do love this, and I feel a personal connection to it).
But, your technicality (grammar, punctuation, etc.) needs a little work. The biggest problem with you grammar would be your lack of capitalization in the (I) department. Normally, with any other thing I would tell you that it is up to you to change this or not, and I am saying that, but I also am saying that I strongly recommend you fixing/changing this. I typically wouldn't care if it was any other minor grammar error, but the (I) thing really bugs me the most out of any grammar mistake.
And I think that you would benefit from a little more punctuation. Just saying. But, as always, it's up to you.
Peace,
Ht
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