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Hey, Gabby!
Ah, I like first attempts! This was a great poem! I really enjoyed it and the structure was really cool. Language the descriptions were all fine, though I felt the rhymes could have been a little more evened out, seeing as there were areas that seemed awkward without the matching rhyming words. Though you picked it up well, and did a great job in the end.
Nice work! I always enjoy reading your poetry! Thanks for sharing
Murtuza
I have to say that that was extremly sad. I think that you are very talented. I was suprised when you said that it was your first poem so I thought it may lack alot of the rhythm but it has perfect rhythm, perfect use of words and a perfect and sutible title. Please continue writing more poems like this.