Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek, here to review another amazing piece of literacy and beat the Werewolves once and for all! For the Witches shall win in the end! But before that happens, I am going to help you improve your writing as a whole and improve you as a Young Writer in the process. Of this I am certain. I like all literacy, regardless of what genre or subject it is falls under. When I review your work, this will become apparent to you. Are you ready? Let's begin the review!
I love this poem, and I especially love the last line of it! I like how the whole poem is about how the person who the poet is talking to made their life better, but not for long. They helped them out of depression and gave them happiness, but the happiness did not stay forever. My very favorite part of the entire poem was the ending, when it is revealed that the person who the poet is writing to didn't teach the poet how to deal with loss; they learned that on their own, when the audience of the poem decided to leave. I think this is a very cool piece of work, and I can not find a reason to give it anything less than a perfect rating. Keep writing amazing stories and amazing poems, and don't forget to have a great review day! And for the Witches, we shall win!
-ZeldaIsShiek
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