Hello!!! This is With3r3dros3 here for a review.
So first off, steam1244, I LOVE THE FONT YOU CHOSE. Cherry cream soda is my favorite font out of all of the other fonts! And also, I know you posted this almost a week ago, sorry for being kind of late.
The actual review starts here:
Your poem is pretty good OVERALL, but I have a strong belief that there's a deeper or different meaning behind this poem, which makes me want to know it. Yes, I did get the message that he/she chose to take their own life but I would absolutely LOVE to know why they did. Okay I'm sorry, that sounded a little weird... but the poem is so amazing I would love to know more about the main character. I love how you ended the poem, telling us where they ended up. You wanna know what I love more than that? I love that you didn't say they ended up in Heaven or Hell, but Wonderland. I also love how you were very descriptive about everything like the white pills and what they tasted like.
I see no grammar issues or spelling issues, which is great!!
I honestly have no complaints and nothing else to say except keep up the awesome work, I love your poems so much, and best of wishes!!
Keep up the amazing work!
xo. With3r3dros3
Points: 1150
Reviews: 15
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