Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek, here to review another amazing piece of literacy and beat the Werewolves once and for all! For the Witches shall win in the end! But before that happens, I am going to help you improve your writing as a whole and improve you as a Young Writer in the process. Of this I am certain. I like all literacy, regardless of what genre or subject it is falls under. When I review your work, this will become apparent to you. Are you ready? Let's begin the review!
Hello again, my old friend! I really like poem, and I think it is relatable and accurate. I think that your poem is very realistic, since this happens in real life relationships quite commonly. I think that you are a very good poet and can do great things! This is an amazing poem, and there really is not that much more for me to say because it is so quintessential. I like how the poet is talking to his previous partner and leaves out what she says. This is a personal battle that the poet is fighting, they are not as involved as the writer. Great work as always, and have a great Review Day!
-ZeldaIsShiek, for the glory of both the Witches and your amazing work!
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