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Legacy here for a review.
I love the imagery you use in this poem. I can see the scene happening as I read this. It is very well written.
You use rhyming although it isn't the main aspect of your poem. I love that. Some people pay attention to their rhyming so much that it ruins their poem because they don't pay attention to the message and emotion. You didn't do that.
You have a good message and I love the way that you expressed it.
Overall, a great poem and it's a final draft in my opinion. Legacy.
I would like to know what inspired you to write this if you are okay with sharing that.
I was inspired by Ji-Li Jiang's story about her life and how she thought the world was broken. I also had to write this for a sixth grade project, so I just wrote what came to me.
Hi, J here for a review.
I do like this poem and the point it's getting across. You did a great job describing your settings and portraying emotion.
Your rhyming was the best part because it didn't seem like you were trying to hard but everything still flowed well. Your last stanza was your strongest with all the big words and descriptive tones.
Over all this was a wonderful poem. Sorry for the short review:(.
Good Job and Keep Writing!!
I like your poetry. I like way you explained your deep emotions. very strong mind you have.who doesn't like to hurt someone and can wipe out all pains.bravo.