My surprise to you: Mine!
My surprise to you is mine. You get no surprise.
You give a surprise to me, I take it. On your next birthday i will give it back then take it when you are sleeping.
My surprise to you is mine!
I give you a surprise , you take it. I give you another surprise, I take it back.
My surprise to you is not yours.
You take my surprise to you while I'm preparing. Based on morals this surprise can no longer be yours because i am no longer your friend and i would have given this present to another friend.
My surprise to you is, yet can't be yours.
I mail you a surprise from an anonymous address. You, confused, bring the present. I receive it.
My surprise to you is mine.
My surprise to you will never be yours.
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Huh?
lol this was made when stories only costed like 20 points to make
Haha! Ok :')
You're right. I'm thoroughly confused.
I mean, I think I get it. I do get it, abstractly.
I have no gramatical nitpicks, partially because I was confused...
I think you get the point.
I would only change one thing...
I would replace the colon with a comma. But maybe that's just me and my semi-obsession with commas.
Keep writing!
~WallFlower
Thanks
I GET IT!! The two people are sharing the same surprize, taking turns with it. How cute!
heheheh. Sadly no
I am also confused .
its basically saying the title in different ways