Wow, i have a special connection with this, my boyfriend went to basic training for a summer and when he came back, he wasn't the same, i especially like the line "I've got a hundred words to say of sadness and torment and still a thousand to convey" I really hope that you can dig a little deeper into your poems, you have so much potential to exploit true emotions, but you seem to have a topical safety. nevertheless, i enjoyed this very much please write more and let me know when you do:)
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