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Life itself can be heaven or hell. There's the good times, but even know as I type there are the bad times. Your poem truly is a gruesome, yet magnificent piece. I am curious to know what inspired you to write this, if you don't mind the question of course. But anyway, you have great punctuation, spelling, this poem is flawless. Keep on writing, you will go far!
I'm not really sure how to answer because it just popped out of my mind.
Hey...it is a really nice poem.....the way you have described the current standard of life....the degrading values....it forces the reader to think about what the world has become.
This is my very first review...so I wont comment on the technicalities as I am myself very sparingly aware of them.
But could you tell me what exactly you wanted to tell through your last paragraph...it was not entirely clear to me.
The meaning of it is the place we live in:
"It%u2019s where we live our days." It was originally "...spend our days" but I just put live.
Sorry about that.
The meaning of it is the place we live in:
"Its where we live our days." It was originally "...spend our days" but I just put live.
Sorry about that.
okay thanks