Hand in Hand

Hey there, Rosan! My name is Scarlett and I'll be reviewing your poetry this evening.

Oh, man. I like this, despite my slight (okay, more than slight) aversion to rhyming lines. >.> Anyway, this is brilliant. I really like the imagery, the concept you have here. It's rather fascinating. The flow is pretty good, and I like the way you write.

And now, I'm afraid that I don't have anything else to say. So, that's it. Also, that last line are just lovely. Thanks for such a brilliant, cute little poem! I hope this review helps, somehow. ^^

Remember; keep it up and never stop writing!

Ah, I like this! It's very simple and very sweet. The thought of going on an adventure with someone, whoever they are, is an interesting idea you played with (and made work.) I would only suggests more powerful lines and words to make your poem even stronger though. I see so much potential dripping, and it's already pretty great!

You could message me if you want me to elaborate more! But for now, nice job.

Ah, I like this! It's very simple and very sweet. I might come back for a full-on review later, but good job!

Oh My! This is just wonderful! <# You are going to be a very famous poet one day, mah Dear!!!! <333

Since I really llike the whole thing, and see nothing bad, I'll just tell you my faves!


Favourite Line(s)~
please don’t ever leave me,
just keep holding my hand.

(AH-MAZING ENDING!!!)

Favourite word(s)~
both me and you

Sorry this was so short, But It was too good to point out problems!!!! Keep writing <333

Love and Stuff~

Kammie

Hey Rosan,
Nice poem, theme goes well with written stuff.
Written pretty simple and sweet.
Liked the rhyming, consistently carried i the whole poem.
Just find this line bit upsetting : I’ll find you, be assured to know.
Otherwise, all in all- good job.
Keep writing