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Great work on this one too. It as this deep mood for writing yet at the same time use of words has a childlike joy to it. A problem I do have though, is with the last 2 lines of the repeated first stanza. "My thoughts are filled with poetry; My heart is full of sound" carries expression and emotion, but the second half, "My head is spinning 'round 'n round; I think I just might drown!" I do not like. Although it fits childlike aspect, it sounds corny and thrown in for the sake of the rhyming, and I just didn't like having it follow up those other two deep lines. I like your tying in with nature in your poems, and hope you will read some of my writings later to come, because I will at times do that to, as nature is something I like too.

Very much like this poem. Captured the beauty of poetry and entwined it with nature successfully to make the reader envisage a scene of immaculate beauty. Well done.

Hey Rainn,

Great poem you wrote! I absolutely love creativity and I really like how you portrayed it; so this was an amazing to me! In the fourth stanza, you spelled world wrong, but that is minor. Also, in the fifth stanza I think you meant " their" instead of "there". Other than those minor grammar mistakes, this was a nice emphasized poem. Great job; this poem is creative in it's own way because no one actually goes out and writes poems about being creative. As I said, great job and keep writing!

all my suggestions are in ( ), I don't know how to spell it.


My thoughts are fill(e)d with poetry,
My heart is full of sound.
My head is spinning 'round 'n 'round,
I think I just might drown!(I like this stanza(did I spell that right?))


Creativity is mine,
Mine and yours to share.

To gift the world with puirty, (swap around the I and R in purity(haha, I have spell check))
A gift of creativity.

To gift the wold a wondrous song,
A gift to make the heart sing long.(every time I read this I wanna say along instead of long, but along doesn't sound right)


Fill there eyes with colored ties,
or Bows or Jumping Beans.(Go ties!!!)


My thoughts are filled with poetry,
My heart is full of sound.
My head is spinning 'round 'n 'round,
I think I just might drown!(I like that you repeat it)


All I see is rainbowed(tack out the ed in rainbowed?) trees,
Blue or Purple Yellow bees.

Sky(')s of green a(nd) grass of white,
Shinning like a deep moon's light.

Creativity is mine,
MIne(you capitalized the I in mine.) and yours to share.

To gift the world with purity,
A gift of creativity.(nothing wrong here)

To gift the world a wondrous song,
A gift to make the heart sing long.(same as last)

Rainbowed(drop the ed) sky(')s fill up my eyes as I gaze to distant things.
All I see is colored trees,
A Red or Blue or Yellow breeze.


My thoughts are filled with poetry,
My heart is full of sound.
My head is spinning 'round 'n 'round!(were is the "I think I might just drown!"? I liked that part)

Let all my creativity,
Let all my beautiful songs,
Let all my creativity,
Be Strong.(nothing to say here)

all in all, I love it. And no I'm not just saying that to be nice, or cause I know you on other sites, I really mean it.