Hello there, this is Ina also known as loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment for this poem about the beach.
Oh my, I love the beach and love it when people write poems about how refreshing the place is. I love the descriptions you gave, of the view of the beach and how the sun is so bright. I think the third stanza is funny. Then I read the end and I like, "Oh, it's kind of sad people don't take care of the beaches of the world." It is very beautiful but people just forget to maintain it properly. Overall, it's good. I know this is an old poem and you've possibly improve in your other writings. But it just catches my eye when the beach is mentioned. Keep on writing!
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