Sunlight Warrior here with a review! Firstly, well done! You have written a fantastic poem, with a simple message, but such powerful words. I love the fact that you've decided to use natural imagery in your first two stanzas, showing the importance of the theme of individuality and how we should embrace ourselves for who we are, rather than feeling obliged to conform to society and meet it's needs. My favourite stanza is the last, as you perfectly wrap up the poem with a message that so many people can take away and realise - life is precious and short. We're only given one chance to live so we should take our time to succeed and make our mark in the world. Well done and keep writing!