Hello hello, I know this is a little bit of an older post so dont mind me. This is a very nice poem like many others have said it's short and sweet. With that being said it is hard to find any feedback to give besides personal opinion I can only think to maybe push the imagery we get a sense of what the stars look like but what is the sky like? Is it tossing like the sea or the gray tones of a wash over the canvas? Although that might counteract the short concise nature of the poem.
Regardless it is very well done, Keep it up and remember to drink water.
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