Young Writers Society

Hello there. This is Ina a.k.a loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment about your poem. It is very inspiring and written well. Anyways, I will explain further down below.

First impressions. I saw the title and the description, of course this is gonna be an inspirational poem and I am happy, it's not a cringe poem like those poems that Facebook moms post. When I first read it, I noticed the two words "Your beauty" is capitalized and emphasized to tell the readers that you are talking about their beauty and no one else's. It also reminded me of the title of Beauty and the Beast. I don't know why, it just did. But the message it's telling is shown boldly between each line.

As I continued reading over and over again, it remined me of the main character of a K-drama/Webtoon called "True Beauty". She is apparently an ugly girl and is bullied for her beauty. She had to exchange school and used makeup to stop people from bullying her and hurting her. And I ain't telling the rest because you can just read the webtoon or watch the K-drama. But no matter how people think she's ugly, she has a kind heart and is beautiful in the inside.

As a insecure teen, this was very helpful. Thanks a lot. Overall, it tells a good message and the way it was written was nice too. Keep it up! Have a good morning, afternoon or evening for everyone especially our lovely writer @Phillauthet!

What I got from this poem is a "Beauty's on the inside" message. A beautiful poem with a sweet message. You're reminding the reader that even though the beauty that you see in a mirror is nice, it's your personality that truly matters. You also remind the reader that when some people bully, it may be the cause of them feeling just as insecure as you may feel. They haven't had the time, or felt the need, to look at their personality and decide if it was beautiful. What I also got from this, is that you shouldn't look to other people to decide if you're truly beautiful, in the end, only you can decide that.

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First off when i read this lovely poem i was thinking that everyone has Beauty in them we all pretty at the end of the day and also when i read this poem i cried a little cause it was so lovely the way you said it Look at your art.
Whatever you do best.
Look at what makes you 'you',
Look for your Beauty. and this was the part that i really like in your poem it was beautiful

Second my compliment to your poem is just know everyone has Beauty in them and at the end of the day no one can't say you not but at the end of the day you are


Third how you can improve is you inspiring so many people about there Beauty and thats good cause some people don't know they are pretty but they are they just don't know yet until they read this nice lovely poem

keep writing and this was a amazing poem i ever read by Jay~!!

Wow this is one of the most epical poems that i have come across my life!!!!
The depth of meaning of your poem revolves around restoring our self confidence and wiping out any possible self doubt by believing in our inner beauty of mind and soul This is what makes your poem truly spectacular

This is a much needed poem in this era of bullies, prejudices, bias and rejections . This poem emphasizes on what makes us truly special and worthwhile in our heights of personality and character. You have amicably motivated us to never pay heed to our criticisms when they tend to question our abilities and strengths
""Once you've found it,
hold on to it.
When you're feeling inept,
remember
Your Beauty.""
This is my favourite stanza of your Wonderful poem.It stresses on the importance to remember our beauty and worth during dark and stormy times of life

Overall your poem is unconditionally one of the most meaningful ,and valuable texts that maybe appear easy to comprehend but far difficult to execute in real life

Heya, Rubes here with a review. I like to spilt my work into 4 sections: First impressions (what I think after reading once), deeper meanings (more examinations into single lines and stanzas), improvements (what I think overall can be better) and the final conclusion (what I rate the poem out of 10 and a final overview.

First Impressions: I love the message here and of finding your beauty in different ways. Using the mirror example really gave depth, just because we all look into the mirror to see how 'pretty' we are visually.

Deeper findings/meanings:

Find a mirror.
Look, stare hard.
Harder!!

In it, do you see
Your Beauty?
-
Now look inside,
at your personality.
Now, do you see
Your Beauty?

Not yet?
No problem!
There's more!

Look at what makes you 'you',
Look for your Beauty.

When someone is mocking,
taunting, insulting you,.......
For they haven't yet found
Their Beauty.

Lovely poem! I love the message you’re giving us,the readers.That we are beautiful no matter what.It’s beautiful and truthful.My favorite parts of the poem are these lines:”Find a mirror” and “Not yet? No problem!” These simple lines tell us to really look inside of ourselves.These kinds of poems are the things people need.Good Job and have a lovely day!

Hey Phil!! Incoming review!

I see you have a new poem here. Let me review it!

I'll review a few stanzas at a time.

Find a mirror.
Look, stare hard.
Harder!!
In it, do you see
Your Beauty?

Look inside, now,
at your personality.
Now, do you see
Your Beauty?

Not yet?
No problem!
There's more!

Look at your art.
Whatever you do best.
Look at what makes you 'you',
Look for your Beauty.

Do it for yourself,
not for me;
Search within you
for Your Beauty.

Once you've found it,
hold on to it.
When you're feeling inept,
remember
Your Beauty.

When someone is mocking,
taunting, insulting you,
you can only pity
their obvious insecurity,
and laugh along --
For they haven't yet found
Their Beauty.