Whoa there!! This was amazing!! I love the use of description and details you inserted into this poem. I felt like I really connected with it because of the amount of depth and emotion that is woven into it. The way you described exactly what the character is feeling is absolutely brilliant! The only concern I have is the flow of the second to last stanza. It is partially hard to understand what you are trying to portray. Other than that little tid-bit I am thoroughly impressed with this. I give this a 4.5/5.
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