inequitable power

Aptitude:

aptitude
noun
1. a natural ability to do something.
"children with an aptitude for painting and drawing"

Volatile
adjective
1. (of a substance) easily evaporated at normal temperatures.
"volatile solvents such as petroleum ether, hexane, and benzene"
synonyms: evaporative, vaporous, vaporescent;

2. liable to change rapidly and unpredictably, especially for the worse.
"the political situation was becoming more volatile"
synonyms: tense, strained, fraught, uneasy, uncomfortable, charged, explosive, eruptive, inflammatory, turbulent, in turmoil, full of upheavals; More
antonyms: stable, calm
(of a person) liable to display rapid changes of emotion.
"a passionate, volatile young man"
synonyms: unpredictable, changeable, variable, inconstant, inconsistent, uncertain, erratic, irregular, unstable, turbulent, unsteady, unsettled, unreliable, undependable, changing, ever-changing, varying, shifting, fluctuating, fluid, mutable, protean, fitful, wavering, full of ups and downs; More
antonyms: stable, constant

3. (of a computer's memory) retaining data only as long as there is a power supply connected.
noun
noun: volatile; plural noun: volatiles

1. a volatile substance.

de·ni·al [dih-nahy-uhl]
noun
1. an assertion that something said, believed, alleged, etc., is false: Despite his denials, we knew he had taken the purse. The politician issued a denial of his opponent's charges.

2. refusal to believe a doctrine, theory, or the like.

3. disbelief in the existence or reality of a thing.

4. the refusal to satisfy a claim, request, desire, etc., or the refusal of a person making it.

5. refusal to recognize or acknowledge; a disowning or disavowal: the traitor's denial of his country; Peter's denial of Christ.

sub·mis·sion [suhb-mish-uhn]

noun
1. an act or instance of submitting.

2. the condition of having submitted.

3. submissive conduct or attitude.

4. something that is submitted, as an application.

5. Law. an agreement between parties involved in a dispute, to abide by the decision of an arbitrator or arbitrators.

Hi there, I'm trying to understand this short poem with regard to the strength of every the word you use. Writing a short poem seem easy / simple, but the impact is often just not enough, finally making it less effective poem.

aptitude; volatile.*
denial; submission

mhm. mhm. Ahhhh. Yes, I know some of these words.

Well, this poem is a bit short, but, from reading it, I can sense the realism you put into it. When I think of aptitude, I think of the talent that we have and the power we gain from it. When I think of volatile, I think of the flaws we humans possess and how we try to fix them for the better. When I think of denial, I think of the facts that we cannot accept about life and the way we're leading it. And when I think of submission, I think of the way we allow our flaws to enslave us and dominate over us. This is just my opinion, though.

This has a more individualistic than to the traditional form of poetry. I hope to read more from you.