This is a really really cute little poem. It sounds really nice and has a child-like view on the world. I liked your choice of words like fragile. I like how you used italics for the words red crayon to add emphasis. Just one question, but why did you want to emphasize on that particular point? Thank-you. It was a really good poem. Happy New Year!
justgottabeme13
Points: 750
Reviews: 5
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