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Wed Jun 13, 2012 12:23 pm
Demeter says...



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1. work.php?id=95897
"Your jokes are scarier than your earrings." -Twit

"14. Pretend like you would want him even if he wasn't a prince. (Yeah, right.)" -How to Make a Guy Like You - Disney Princess Style

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Wed Jun 13, 2012 3:40 pm
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DragonGirl11 says...



Go Phoenixes!
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1. Untitled story, Chapter 1 part 1
2. Untitled story, Chapter 1 part 2
3. The Hawk
Last edited by DragonGirl11 on Sun Jun 17, 2012 1:40 am, edited 2 times in total.
~*~

"You could look at the raindrops on your window, or you could look through the window and see the rainbow."
~K.C. Oxford

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Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:56 pm
ChocoCookie says...



Team Siren

1. Jane

You'll maybe have to scroll down to see my review. ^^

Date: 15.06.12 (My birthday ^^)

1. My Gift To You

EDIT:

2. Love has no escape

3. Broccoli

Date: 16.06.12

1. Mask
2. Hana and Emily

Date: 17.06.12

1. Listen
2. Woman
Last edited by ChocoCookie on Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:17 am, edited 8 times in total.
I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living.


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Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:58 pm
Lumi says...



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I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:46 am
lilymoore says...



Yay! Reviews and stuff!
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June 13th

1. When Love is Lost
2. raindrops keep falling on my head
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:16 am
PatriciaTina says...



Team Gargoyle! Go us! :D

1) work.php?id=95297#comments
2) work.php?id=95641#comments
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

Spoiler! :
I lost the game.

"I always hear punch me in the face when you're speaking, but it's usually subtext."
~ Dr. John Watson
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:10 am
eyeofthestorm says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95886
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95924
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95710

You may have to scroll down to see my reviews, sorry!!
Bilbo: What have I got in my pocket?
Gollum: Handsies!
Bilbo: Nope, guess again.
Gollum: A knife! No, no...
Bilbo: Wrong again.
Gollum: String! Or... Nothing!
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:03 pm
Shearwater says...



Team Griffin!

1. work.php?id=95236#comments
2. work.php?id=95667#comments
3. work.php?id=95647#comments
4. work.php?id=95898#comments
5. work.php?id=95829#comments
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:06 pm
Tsukarin says...



Team siren, I think I am in.

So far I have done 3, but the last one doesn't count.

1. work.php?id=78692
Untitled. (Plz review)

2. work.php?id=95927
(Untitled Fantasy Adventure Story Set in Melbourne)
Where does life start and where does it end. If I were to disappear from this place and never return, who would miss me, if I was a person who no one ever cared about?
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:43 pm
Shady says...



Team Phoenix

work.php?id=95938

work.php?id=95931
Last edited by Shady on Sun Jun 17, 2012 3:02 am, edited 1 time in total.

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:19 pm
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Niebla says...



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1. work.php?id=95892
2. work.php?id=95235
Last edited by Niebla on Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2012 11:42 pm
xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



This be for Team Gargoyle!

1) work.php?id=94016
2) work.php?id=93573
3) work.php?id=94015
4)http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95822

Woot
Last edited by xXTheBlackSheepXx on Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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The good news is we can't make any mistakes.
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