Just like your smile...

This is a very emotional, very real poem and I like that.
The poem could be more specific and have more detail around the middle, to help the reader connect with the poem more
The first stanza is really beautiful and has a lot of truth in it. I love that first stanza. That first stanza is a lot better than the rest of the poem; that first stanza sticks with you. It doesn't gain the same quality and feel until the last few stanzas and even then not as much as the other ones are.
I love the last line too though, especially that pronoun, you. You will surely meet what again someday? Us? Someone else, like us maybe? It's unclear and I love that, it's the type of abstractness that works well in poems.
I didn't mean to be harsh; I like this poem and I love that first stanza. I hope this review helped though, and I hope that you have a merry Review Day and a happy New Year's.
-tgirly

Hey again! I'm glad I get to read another one of your poems!

I thought it was cool how the beginning rhymed. You started to have something going when you used 'together, treasure, forever' but I think you quit the rhyme scheme after that. If you really wanted to make this poem something memorable, you could break out your thesaurus and get the whole thing to rhyme But rhyming poems can be really difficult.

I think this poem definitely has a nice message, that the memories you spend with certain people will remain forever and you should cherish them. It reminds me a bit of the musical Wicked. My favorite song in that musical has the lines "because I knew you, my life has changed for the better."

Now, I think there are a few things you could fix besides the rhyme scheme. Take this line for instance:

Look at all the beautiful days
that we have spent together,
That filled up all of our hearts with your memories.

It's a bit confusing. Why would her heart be filled with his memories? (I'm assuming it's a boy and girl)

To go on through tomorrow
we seem to have left them behind the door.
But we got to meet a wonderful angel.

It's unclear who 'them' is referring to in line 2

And they will forever remain
in our memories to shine,
just like your smile.

Again, who is 'they'?

If you will tell us that you love us
we will tell you that we all
love you very much, thrice!

And here, who is the narrator talking to? Who is 'you'?

So, there is a little confusion here, but nothing that should be too hard to clarify! If you be a little more specific, it would get your message through more clearly

Keep writing!

Sorry for the mistake in one of the lines but the last line is:- "we will surely meet again someday...."