Listen.
The good stuff:
1: A simple rhythm.
2. A good rhyme scheme- except for the first stanza.
3. A simple message that needs to be shared with the world!
The bad stuff:
1. Even though its a simple message, it isn't exactly clear all the way through.
2. Just a suggestion- perhaps some capital letters?
Good job with this exceptional piece of poetry!
Points: 620
Reviews: 170
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