This is an interesting poem, though I am a bit confused. It flows nicely in the first half and nicely in the second half. Yet I don't see how the two halves fit together. Of course since it is poetry things don't always have to fit, but it would have been nice to see a connection back to the title in the end, or even have it tie together in the end. I did like this poem though. Poetry is an interesting genre that doesn't have many rules in certain styles so it is always nice to read a variety of different kinds.
Points: 904
Reviews: 10
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