Waistland By Me

There's a place where all My toughts flow

A Place where all My feelings manage to go

A Waistland deserted and all Alone

A Waistland cold and all of My own

A Waistland where you can See, My Life as a Person

A Waistland by Me

P.S Pretty Short I know...Btw is Waistland written right ?? or is is Waisteland I had some doubts about it..

Actually, it's "wasteland." A rather strange word, now that I think of it.

My suggestion? Don't capitalize everything. You capitalize wasteland, my, alone, life, and person. Try not to capitalize that much.

Also, I'm sure this is just a typo, but it should be "thoughts" instead of "toughts."

Not too bad though.

Thnx Snoink I'm not English so sometimes I've got some problems with my Grammar

OOPs I Capatilized the G in Grammar and again LOL