*Sigh* Emo the Brad. I mean, Brad the Emo. No, not really you haven't got there--yet :P lol.
But honestly, I loved it. It was a poem about you and not someone else too which I really liked..it really focused on what was going on in your head and you don't do that much. I would say this would go better in the Lyric section but now that I think about it it would fit in Narrative and Dramatic as well soo I guess it might as well stay here.