Sylvia

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Sylvia

If you look through the dipping boughs
of the elm trees
you can see the glittering patches
of light

that is her genius

hidden beneath shadow layers of
cotton and year
are the shards that splinter
like little foot bones
and tear at rational thought

to brave the new world
would be a wonderous thing

it's all just a beautiful
dream

two by two they fall
the haunting obituary of silence
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Very simple, I really like it.

Well done.

;)
*~*Shining through the dark black night...Twinkling Starz*~*




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thank you, I wrote it after watching the movie Sylvia.

CL
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

Got YWS?




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It was awsome i loved it keep writing ill keep reading.
Just belive and you will acheive!




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thank you Tazy
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

Got YWS?




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wow. thats a very good poem. I like it a lot. The last 2 lines are the best




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Wow this was deeply beautiful!
I really enjoyed it... something to just read while finishing my work... Now I can finish it.
Great Job!




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Green Monkey: thankies...

TBR: ooooo...thankies to you to...hahahah procrastinators unite...

CL
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

Got YWS?



Il faut imaginer Sisyphe heureux (One must imagine Sisyphus happy).
— Albert Camus, The Myth of Sisyphus